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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: My only song.. Sat May 10, 2008 10:47 am | |
| This is my song.I sing it and others lot of times..but mostly in jap..i dunno how to type jap words in eng..so i use eng.. It's a full song..Give some comments and u can add some sentences or sing along =)
My song:Feelings of a broken love By:Music
I don't understand why That you have to leave me..alone In this place of destiny and faith I miss you so badly But you walk away..
I try to dream about you But you never appear in my dreams How i wish that you can appear
Chorus:I'm trying to forget you But you chose to appear in front of me How I wish that I could have vanish In front of you And fade away The day that you walk away I'm feeling so heartbroken My heart was shattered into pieces Can you feel the pain of love? I wish that you could come back And we'll be friends
I'm trying to forget you But you chose to appear in front of me How I wish that I could have vanish In front of you And fade away
You chose to disappear in front of me You never say goodbye to me In my heart you are gone day by day I'm lost without the love in my heart
I'm trying to forget you But you chose to appear in front of me How I wish that I could have vanish In front of you And fade away
Fade away Without the love in my heart
End of my song ~*Enjoy*~
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Athrun Admin
Number of posts : 2105 Age : 32 Location : Watching over you, you can't see me. Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sat May 10, 2008 12:12 pm | |
| - -WoA-Music wrote:
- This is my song.I sing it and others lot of times..but mostly in jap..i dunno how to type jap words in eng..so i use eng..
U made a jap song o.O? umm nice translation | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sat May 10, 2008 12:33 pm | |
| not rly..i sang eng..but mostly in jap.. so this is a eng song..coz i feel that eng is better | |
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y1nny
Number of posts : 89 Age : 33 Location : Searching for the sense of secure :] Registration date : 2008-02-23
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sat May 10, 2008 3:30 pm | |
| woooh~ i like parts of lyrics =X but for the chorus, memories can never fade but feeling will ^^
"The day that you walk away I'm feeling so heartbroken My heart was shattered into pieces Can you feel the pain of love? I wish that you could some back And we'll be friends"
How i seriously wish he could know this ><
TT, I'm still in the mood of without him life is boring =XXX | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sat May 10, 2008 5:27 pm | |
| actually.. this is my heart and mind feelings song.. coz when i always walk home.. i feel a sense of loneliness,a bit sad and a bit heartbroken so this is how i feel in my heart and my mind but here i express my feelings to others.. =) whoops got one sentence i type wrongly The "I wish that you could some back" is come not some i go chng it | |
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y1nny
Number of posts : 89 Age : 33 Location : Searching for the sense of secure :] Registration date : 2008-02-23
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sat May 10, 2008 8:27 pm | |
| but nice luhhs xDDD sometimes when i walked home alone i tends to sms ppl to disturb cause i HATE the feeling of lonesome and the feeling just don't seems nice and will lead to think of something else!
xDDD | |
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Athrun Admin
Number of posts : 2105 Age : 32 Location : Watching over you, you can't see me. Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sun May 11, 2008 9:42 am | |
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ShaZZ
Number of posts : 2080 Age : 32 Location : My Soul Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sun May 11, 2008 10:07 pm | |
| Lols..This isn't about sms..Its abt her holy song~ Lols..Music, you wrote this rite? | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sun May 11, 2008 10:39 pm | |
| yes i did.. i put my heart and mind into it..
i wanna change the chorus coz i feel like it doesn't make any sense.. | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sun May 11, 2008 10:47 pm | |
| I ve edited the chorus and the ending Oh ya and i ve changed the title too.. coz i feel like the feelings of a broken love is like the song.. so enjoy.. | |
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Athrun Admin
Number of posts : 2105 Age : 32 Location : Watching over you, you can't see me. Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Sun May 11, 2008 11:52 pm | |
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ShaZZ
Number of posts : 2080 Age : 32 Location : My Soul Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 1:22 am | |
| yeah one thing...Im curious abt the jap thingy.. Not only that...I would like to pin point some stuff to u music Tell u on msn xD | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 9:43 am | |
| hmmms ok =) when will u b online in msn? coz i dun often go msn =p | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 9:47 am | |
| sigh when i 1st hear the sad song new forum.. i wanted to sing in jap..
komoyawa kimikiya nadana soyamo naniya soyomo~ syonara~ kiyowanada sokimiya syonara~! naniya soyomo kiyowanada sokimiya kimi nadana~ syonara.. | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 9:59 am | |
| when i hear this sad song in the new forum.. i feel that my heart is bleeding and crying.. as for me.. i almost cried too.. coz this song..makes me feel like someone's friends are killed in a bombing or something den the only fren,who survived,cried in sadness and sorrow..coz he/her lost their best friends in a bombing or something.. this is what i feel frm the sadness song in the new forum =) | |
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Athrun Admin
Number of posts : 2105 Age : 32 Location : Watching over you, you can't see me. Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 11:26 am | |
| that was what i intended to do with the forum song. Meant to be sad. Nostalgic | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 12:08 pm | |
| how about u try to make a sad one with this song into yur story? | |
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Athrun Admin
Number of posts : 2105 Age : 32 Location : Watching over you, you can't see me. Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 12:47 pm | |
| as in the story i wrote for exam. this song 1st appeared in the forum from my story. | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Mon May 12, 2008 4:03 pm | |
| oh..can include into my song too? thanks a lot.. rly thanks.. | |
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ShaZZ
Number of posts : 2080 Age : 32 Location : My Soul Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Wed May 14, 2008 8:23 pm | |
| Music...Ur song... u can do better!! Not bad for ur first try^^ xD | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Thu May 15, 2008 10:40 pm | |
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ShaZZ
Number of posts : 2080 Age : 32 Location : My Soul Registration date : 2008-01-27
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Fri May 16, 2008 9:31 pm | |
| Lols...there's still room for improvement xD | |
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-WoA-Music
Number of posts : 1202 Age : 31 Location : Standed in front of a white and yellow light.. Registration date : 2008-02-11
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| Subject: Re: My only song.. Fri May 16, 2008 11:32 pm | |
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