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PostSubject: My only song..   Sat May 10, 2008 10:47 am

This is my song.I sing it and others lot of times..but mostly in jap..i dunno how to type jap words in eng..so i use eng..
It's a full song..Give some comments and u can add some sentences or sing along =)

My song:Feelings of a broken love
By:Music

I don't understand why
That you have to leave me..alone
In this place of destiny and faith
I miss you so badly
But you walk away..

I try to dream about you
But you never appear in my dreams
How i wish that you can appear

Chorus:I'm trying to forget you
But you chose to appear in front of me
How I wish that I could have vanish
In front of you
And fade away

The day that you walk away
I'm feeling so heartbroken
My heart was shattered into pieces
Can you feel the pain of love?
I wish that you could come back
And we'll be friends

I'm trying to forget you
But you chose to appear in front of me
How I wish that I could have vanish
In front of you
And fade away

You chose to disappear in front of me
You never say goodbye to me
In my heart you are gone day by day
I'm lost without the love in my heart

I'm trying to forget you
But you chose to appear in front of me
How I wish that I could have vanish
In front of you
And fade away

Fade away
Without the love in my heart


End of my song
~*Enjoy*~


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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sat May 10, 2008 12:12 pm

-WoA-Music wrote:
This is my song.I sing it and others lot of times..but mostly in jap..i dunno how to type jap words in eng..so i use eng..

U made a jap song o.O?

umm nice translation

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Just these stalk words, I find.
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak.
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sat May 10, 2008 12:33 pm

not rly..i sang eng..but mostly in jap..
so this is a eng song..coz i feel that eng is better
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sat May 10, 2008 3:30 pm

woooh~
i like parts of lyrics =X
but for the chorus, memories can never fade but feeling will ^^

"The day that you walk away
I'm feeling so heartbroken
My heart was shattered into pieces
Can you feel the pain of love?
I wish that you could some back
And we'll be friends"

How i seriously wish he could know this ><

TT, I'm still in the mood of without him life is boring =XXX
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sat May 10, 2008 5:27 pm

actually..
this is my heart and mind feelings song..
coz when i always walk home..
i feel a sense of loneliness,a bit sad and a bit heartbroken
so this is how i feel in my heart and my mind
but here i express my feelings to others..
=)
whoops got one sentence i type wrongly
The "I wish that you could some back"
is come not some
i go chng it
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sat May 10, 2008 8:27 pm

but nice luhhs xDDD
sometimes when i walked home alone i tends to sms ppl to disturb cause i HATE the feeling of lonesome and the feeling just don't seems nice and will lead to think of something else!

xDDD
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sun May 11, 2008 9:42 am

lol sms spam is <3

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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sun May 11, 2008 10:07 pm

Lols..This isn't about sms..Its abt her holy song~
Lols..Music, you wrote this rite?

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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sun May 11, 2008 10:39 pm

yes i did..
i put my heart and mind into it..

i wanna change the chorus coz i feel like it doesn't make any sense..
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sun May 11, 2008 10:47 pm

I ve edited the chorus and the ending
Oh ya and i ve changed the title too..
coz i feel like the feelings of a broken love is like the song..
so enjoy..
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Sun May 11, 2008 11:52 pm

curious bout the jap o.o

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There are no flowers, no not this time.
There'll be no Angels grading the lines.
Just these stalk words, I find.
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak.
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 1:22 am

yeah one thing...Im curious abt the jap thingy..
Not only that...I would like to pin point some stuff to u music
Very Happy
Tell u on msn xD

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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 9:43 am

hmmms ok =)
when will u b online in msn?
coz i dun often go msn =p
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 9:47 am

sigh when i 1st hear the sad song new forum..
i wanted to sing in jap..

komoyawa kimikiya
nadana soyamo
naniya soyomo~
syonara~
kiyowanada sokimiya
syonara~!
naniya soyomo
kiyowanada sokimiya
kimi nadana~
syonara..
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 9:59 am

when i hear this sad song in the new forum..
i feel that my heart is bleeding and crying..
as for me..
i almost cried too..
coz this song..makes me feel like someone's friends are killed in a bombing or something
den the only fren,who survived,cried in sadness and sorrow..coz he/her lost their best friends in a bombing or something..
this is what i feel frm the sadness song in the new forum =)
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 11:26 am

that was what i intended to do with the forum song. Meant to be sad. Nostalgic

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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 12:08 pm

how about u try to make a sad one with this song into yur story?
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 12:47 pm

as in the story i wrote for exam. this song 1st appeared in the forum from my story. Very Happy

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There are no flowers, no not this time.
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Just these stalk words, I find.
I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak.
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Mon May 12, 2008 4:03 pm

oh..can include into my song too?
thanks a lot..
rly thanks..
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Wed May 14, 2008 8:23 pm

Music...Ur song... u can do better!! Very Happy
Not bad for ur first try^^ xD

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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Thu May 15, 2008 10:40 pm

gosh thanks shazz..
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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Fri May 16, 2008 9:31 pm

Lols...there's still room for improvement xD

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PostSubject: Re: My only song..   Fri May 16, 2008 11:32 pm

ya i noe,shazz
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